This is quite boring to watch, but not too boring. I did not noticed anything wrong. I think that you should try publishing it, it looks pretty acceptable for a Vault.
Yoshi's Cookie TAS.fm2
Uploaded 8/6/2019 6:31 PM by King O (2 files)
For Nintendo Entertainment SystemIn 20:13.93 (72956 frames), 2228 rerecords
8573 views, 238 downloads
Yoshi's Cookie (Round 10, No RNG Manipulation,).fm2
Uploaded 8/4/2019 7:37 AM by King O (2 files)
For Nintendo Entertainment SystemIn 03:55.46 (14151 frames), 280 rerecords
8539 views, 241 downloads