I still like this hack and this run, and am still voting yes, but I think it would be better served if you take more time to really go over each level and really optimize each bit of it. A TAS of this length would really take at least a month to do , and I bet you can save much more time by really studying the game.
I do want to see this hack published, but it's going to take a seriously optimized and thought out run to get it there, hacks are generally given pretty harsh scrutiny.
You can create a thread for this game over in the forums : http://tasvideos.org/forum/viewforum.php?f=40 EDIT: there is already a thread for this games hacks here:
http://tasvideos.org/forum/viewtopic.php?t=14861 as was kindly pointed out to me 8D
You can also post videos and input files of your progress there for feedback. In the mean time I might recommend cancelling this run, as Spikestuff points out some of your new times are slower then your old ones, which doesn't bode well.
Still a good start for a first TAS though, keep improving!