In general, I'd recommend posting your TASes in the relevant thread before making a submission, especially if you're new to TASing. The purpose of this forum is to judge a presumed-finished TAS, and either accept it or reject it outright. In the game threads, though, we're more interested in helping you find improvements. If you post a rough work here, then you'll get a very hostile reception; if you post it in the game thread, you'll get a much more positive reception, as a general rule.