Okay so I watched it all again and this is how I felt while watching:
Fight 1 Goku vs Vegeta: That was quick, even though that's a lv1 vs lv1 fight. Wasn't really boring.
Fight 2 Goku vs Violet guy: quick, and you started using more moves from Goku so that was interesting.
Fight 3 Vegeta vs Goku : I hate that song :p Quick and a variety of moves, good.
Fight 4 Frieza vs gangbang: killing Vegeta was really quick. For Krillin you hit him with the same move multiple times, which is meh. Piccolo was okay. That was quick enough, really the most boring part was Krillin.
Fight 5 the crew vs Frieza: Dat Genkidama, really quick fight and nice to watch :D
Fight 6 Goku vs Frieza: Double special attacks are the shit, really nice fight :D
Fight 7 Gotenks vs Gotenks: Too bad the ball time is rather slow :/ That was okay.
Fight 8 Trunks vs Frieza: Quick and entertaining, nice. :)
Fight 9 Doctor vs Goku: when submitting, you should say that the doctor can only charge his energy when grabbing an ennemy. Bad character for a TAS, I'm glad there is only 1 fight with him.
Fight 10 C18 vs Vegeta: Vegeta doesn't even stand a chance, nice and rather quick :)
Fight 11 Piccolo vs Cell: You really don't let him a single chance, nice :D I just found out that you end up the fight with 4% energy (becoming 7%) that aren't useful, maybe there are small optimizations to do in different fights?
Fight 12 Cell vs the lovers: a shot is missed. Other than that, that fight was good, you counter-attack immediately after C18 enters the battle, and that was quick.
Fight 13 Vegeta family vs Cell: I wondered if it would bring any good switching to Trunks. Good fight, a little slower after you killed the first Cell but nonetheless a good fight.
Fight 14 Goku family vs Cell: this time you switch characters, you use it to counter a Cell's kamehameha, overall a nice fight and just at a good speed, nice :D
Fight 15 Gotenks vs Gotenks: I was going to think "oh no another ballfight" and instead it was really quick, so I was happily surprised. (Yeah even after watching it 4 times.)
Fight 16 Goku vs Vegeta: rather quick. In this match I figure that the worst enemy for the that is the fact fighters go far away in the air if you start hitting them hard, so this should be added in the notes if you submit this run. Anyway entertainment was good.
Fight 17 Buu vs Gohan: That chocolate move is really slow and throws Gohan far away, maybe you could gain time by using less this move? Yeah I really don't like the music for this match but heh, nothing could be done here. Hopefully it finished sooner than I would have expected, but I feel you could gain more time in this fight.
Fight 18 Vegeta vs Buu: Rather quick and different moves used, a good match.
Fight 19 Buu vs Buu: NOT THAT SONG AGAIN D: The chocolate move is quicker, the rest of the fight is okay, but I would favor for less chocolate (except for when you finish the first Buu).
Fight 20 Gotenks vs Buu: That finish with the Ball move was nice :D It makes me think that you haven't used the Ghosts special attack at all with Gotenks, how about using it in the earlier fights then? Fight 15 would become fight 7 and the new fight 15 could use the ghost move.
Fight 21 Gohan vs Buu: Nice, a double move cancelling, the least amount of % necessary is used, and you still do a great show in this fight :D
Fight 22 Saiyan Power vs Buu: Really nice, with the counterattacks and all the stuff. :D