It is a good attempt but the optimization is not good enough to gain a yes vote from me.
Where are you seeing optimization issues? I'm a layperson at Super Metroid, and to me it looked fine throughout.
This is a perfectly reasonable critique. TASes really should be as perfect as a human can devise. Its mostly tiny things adding up over the hour+. A few examples are I forgot to shoot the door before the damage boost the second time through the bat room. I also forgot that it's possible to jump directly into the morph ball hole in the high jump E-tank room. I did a wall jump both times through that room. I also didn't do optimal MB manipulation. It's hard to keep all of this in mind as a relative newcomer. I'm not aware of the level of optimization required for tasvideos so I thought I would throw my hat in the ring especially since it is a big improvement.