eien86: Claiming for judging.
eien86: Hi milk and welcome to TASVideos.org!
As much as we strive to accomodate player's preferences and are always open to new ideas as to publishable TAS is, your submission is lacking on several well-established criteria to consider it for publication.
First, the choice of game seems arbitrary, as you picked a pre-release version rather than the full version (see: #8985: Mikewillplays's GBA WarioWare, Inc.: Mega Microgames! "Minigame: Crazy Cars" in 33:41.06). We do accept demos and pre-releases (See: Game Choice), as long as those offer some unique features (e.g., a special demo level) that the full release doesn't. In this case, it doesn't seem the Trial version offers anything that is not contained in the release of the game, so it is hard to justify.
Second, the choice of goal also seems arbitrary. The game seemingly allows you to go up to 999 in score, which would be a fine choice for a standard goal (See: Standard Goals). However, stopping at 28 (actually, 33 in the movie you submitted) is hardly understandable. Maybe this is to include all possible mini-games (i.e., exhausting all the game has to offer), but in this case we would also need to see all possible difficulties (as you reach the higher scores).
For these reasons, I cannot accept the movie now. However, I hope you are not discouraged by this, many users (myself included) took some time to learn how the site and the process of TASing (from game and goal selection, to execution) works. I much recommed you reach to us via Discord or the Forum if you have any questions about these topics, so you can be assured your choices will be accepted in the future.
Looking forward to your next submission(s)!