I'm sorry, but this game is nigh impossible for me to watch - it's simply too slow-paced. There's absolutely no way I can think of for anyone to enjoy a run of this game. You also make obvious technical mistakes such as missing coins during the first level, and don't, say, hit enemies as soon as possible (if I remember correctly, you don't some enemies at all) in the second or use as few eggs as possible (you admit all of these points in the submission text, for that matter). In fact, some digging suggests that your score of 693 is beaten unassisted (at least one location reports a score of 711, though there doesn't seem to be a way at first glance to confirm this). Kill it with fire.