Hi, GoddessMaria15. I'll try to be honest with you, I hope you don't get discouraged.
I found your WIP mildly boring. All TASes of beat 'em ups are usually boring, even of awesome games like Streets of Rage or Golden Axe. I think the only beat 'em up I ever found entertaining was
this one; the sex scenes in that TAS were hilarious. Maybe you could try adding to your run a bit more of sex?
Also, I would reconsider your choice of using the SNES version. Besides having better graphics overall and being faster, I think those girls look better when they're nude in the Genesis version:
(SNES)
(Genesis)
Your TAS looks very good technically, but I'd focus more on a playaround instead of just speed. For example, maybe you should make them do something lesbian or something similar? Or instead of killing the enemies outside of the screen, just wait a little more until they can be seen and then try to make some sex jokes with them or something.