Hi there, welcome to TASVideos!
Unfortunately, this run doesn't appear to be up to our site's standards of perfection. Super Mario World is very hotly contested and has been thoroughly optimized by a large group of people who will no doubt be posting in this thread sooner or later. ROM hacks are also subject to fierce scrutiny, and need to be extremely polished/notably different enough from the base game to warrant publication.
I highly suggest posting your future runs to the site's Userfiles section, so that other people may check them out before you submit them. If you want to improve your TASing skills, we have several guidelines, resources, and entire sections of the forum dedicated to helping newcomers out. If you want to continue with Super Mario World or one of its hacks, I definitely recommend reading through the game's forum thread, as well as the heavily fleshed out Game Resources page.
Good luck to you in your future endeavors!
Thank you for your suggests. I'll try doing TAS'es better next times. (also marked as cancelled)