Voting no.
First, the rerecording Gens version this was made with - Test 6 - is, I think, about 2 years old. See the Genesis emulation forum for an update.
Second, you should probably use the [!] rom rather than the [h2] as this indicates a hacked rom of some sort. Use of this rom for a run is against
site rules as it will not accurately replicate what is possible on an actual cartridge.
Third, the actual run. It's obvious you know the game pretty well and as far as playthroughs at 20% speed goes this is a pretty good one. However, movies published on this site have in common an aim for precision in every frame. There are numerous obvious small optimisations available at almost any given moment in this run. You miss shots, you hesitate and you occasionally miss-time jumps. Acceptable in speedruns, not in TAS-es.
Some very clear examples, off the top of my head, include the first fight vs the 3:d and 4:th bosses on both runs, where you hit maybe at best one in every three shots and generally miss a veritable cornucopia of opportunities to damage the boss. Yes, I realise these enemies - and most others - are difficult to hit with 100% accuracy at all times, but the entire point of a TAS is to do so anyhow.
Finally, the submission text is, well, to be blunt, lacking. Elaborate on stage strategies: why did you make the weapon choices you did, and when? How could a given segment be improved? If there are parts of the run that appear at a casual glance to be misstakes, explain the reasoning behind them ... and so on.
Please do submit more movies but before doing so I'd advise you to read up on the capabilities of rerecording emulators and what is expected of a submission to this site for it to be accepted. Please read through the
Submission Instructions,
Tips,
Rules and especially the very helpful
Guidelines. Armed with all that, try redoing the run using an updated Gens, a correctly dumped rom and using the more advanced emulator features such as Frame Advance.