Will give feedback once I watch the DSM.
Edit: Frame 57 you press Start for no reason. Autofires A to start the game it seems. Waits a long amount of time to confirm that the data was created, losing time. Also waits a long amount of time to select 'Battle Royale'.
I don't need to watch much more, it's obvious that you didn't really try optimizing it, as you keep autofiring A the whole time. I would assume this is your first time submitting, so I sort of understand why this is so unoptimal.
Not to mention, the game choice doesn't really lend itself to a TAS very well. If this is supposed to be a playaround, it's not interesting enough for a Moon. If it's supposed to be a speedrun, why did you choose 30 turns?
Please read through
http://tasvideos.org/NewcomerCorner.html and
http://tasvideos.org/Guidelines.html before submitting again.
Giving this a No, of course.